saved?
Like an Aardvark digging for termites,
Ronald clawed under the Apple tree.
His Truck’s high-beams, the only light.
“Pay up or we Kill her.”
Money Left. “She’s under the tree.”
Papers headline: Kidnapped child buried alive…
photo credit: http://guyanachronicle.com/buried-alive/
Six on the Sixth Prompt – Feb 2015
http://adamickes.com/2015/02/05/six-on-the-sixth-prompt-feb-2015/
Ade Branwell 4:46 pm on February 8, 2015 Permalink |
This is very good, so much story here in so few words
ContactRida 2:30 am on February 11, 2015 Permalink |
thank you very much:)
milliethom 4:00 pm on February 6, 2015 Permalink |
You have described the disturbing events really well. I love the opening line.
ContactRida 10:05 pm on February 6, 2015 Permalink |
thank you very much:)
Adam Ickes 10:03 am on February 6, 2015 Permalink |
Wow. That’s dark. Really tugs at the emotions. Poor kid. Excellent job!
ContactRida 10:05 pm on February 6, 2015 Permalink |
thanks Adam. i only use what you give me:)
draliman 3:27 am on February 6, 2015 Permalink |
Very cleverly done!
ContactRida 5:29 am on February 6, 2015 Permalink |
thank you! i swear Adam picks the words just for me:)